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Portfolio feedback swap — week 6

Lucas Moreau

Posted 2h ago

Week 6 swap is open. Drop a link to one case study and leave honest feedback on the two posts above yours.

Focus this week: does the first screen tell me the problem in under ten seconds?

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Iris CalderInstructor2h ago

Lead with the problem and one number. “Nurses lost 12 minutes per shift finding patient notes” beats three paragraphs of context.

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  1. Kemi Adeyemi1h ago

    Here's my checkout study. I'd love eyes on the opening — I think it's too long.

  2. Aiko Tanaka52m ago

    @Kemi your before/after is great, move it to the top! The intro can be one sentence.

  3. Omar Haddad30m ago

    First time joining a swap. Shared mine below — please be honest, I can take it.

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